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I'll leave an example here (not from your "descriptions",just to state the point).

"SpongeBob is happy that he is learned a magic trick"

"SpongeBob walks to Squidward to show him his magic trick"

"Squidward doesn't want to see SpongeBob's magic trick"

This is not good at all because every sentence ends with "magic trick".If taken out of context in track pages,it is passable because there are several other episodes around the track.

In-context,this is not working. It better flows like this:

"SpongeBob learns a magic trick"

"He wants to show it to Squidward"

"Squidward doesn't want to see the trick"

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